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Dedicated to for plotting with me. Thanks, cowriter. I hope that you´ll get inspired too.
Also, this takes place during FlirtingWithInsanity´s story where Jayden and Reiner are kidnapped by mafia. Dunno if you know what I´m talking about, but if you don´t, I hope that you´ll enjoy the story anyway.
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What an interesting read! It has quite a unique twist - a cop getting help from a Mob Boss! However, Max isn't out of the woods, yet, I can tell. However, it shows how determined this Officer is.
Earlier in the story, there were a few parts that resembled somewhat of a checklist. I found that they added reality to the situation.
What surprises me is the last line, the offer to kill Freddy. You know that someone is really bad if a Police Officer offers to kill anyone as part of a deal with the Mafia. All in all, I found it was an excellent read!